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The best of bad writing...

Bad writing is bad. I am always scared my sentences are too long unwieldy and will loose interest. So I like to keep them short and to point. I also tend to avoid jargons as much as possible. I dont write because I know how to write but to improve my writing.

I came across a passage which won a "Best of bad writing" contest, I was pleased I was not so smart. Here is the passage. Honestly, I do not understand what she is saying, after two tries I gave up trying.

"The move from a structuralist account in which capital is understood to structure social relationships in relatively homologous ways to a view of hegemony in which power relations are subject to repetition, convergence, and rearticulation brought the question of temporality into the thinking of structure, and marked a shift from a form of Althusserian theory that takes structural totalities as theoretical objects to one in which the insights into the contingent possibility of structure inaugurate a renewed conception of hegemony as bound up with the contingent sites and strategies of the rearticulation of power."

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Hope to write better and better.
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